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Sitting here on my bed of black roses,
I look towards the velvet orange sky.
The smell of fresh tiger lilies fills the air,
The scene is enough to make you cry.

A hardcover book of paths and roads,
My story is nearing its faithful end.
The laughs, the fears all disappear,
The chapters of tears never again.

I am an open book in the cool wind
My pages flicker and dance in the breeze.
The climax of my story, my heart sinks,
I feel relaxed and completely at ease.

My eyes they feel a heavy weight,
The sunset beautiful as ancient gold.
I lay here in my bed of black roses,
My story will never again be told.
A poem that i wrote in 2008 about the ending of a book (the stone angel) it was for a homework assignment :D

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Dedfa Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very nice, the imagery is magic
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ObsidianWolph Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing poem!
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ObsidianWolph Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome!! =D
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penny8rose Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Student Writer
i loooove the last line
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ObsidianWolph Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks you, the story that this is based on is quite sad but it was a really good read none the less :D
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